The questions that I wanted feedback on are:
- Do the products work as a set or is the tone of voice on the door hangers too different from the other two products?
- Which product do you think communicates most effectively?
- Would any of these products prompt you to look further into this problem?
- What would you change about the typography?
- Would you assemble and give someone the toilet If it was easy to pop out and fold?
- Are the products eye catching?
The feedback I received was very helpful and constructive,
I was happy to see that the products look like they are part of a series as this is something I had problems with last year. The feedback also drew my attention to some details that I hadn't noticed such as the use of too many typefaces when it wasn't necessary and also on the door hangers a serif & a nn serif font would have worked better to communicate a 'problem & resolution' set of text.
Another suggestion was to use a wider colour palette which is something I am going to apply to future briefs. Also I need to pay specific attention to the tone of voice I use in my work as a lot of people see the products and immediately think that it's a bit of fun when there is a serious message trying to come through.
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