I agree with the feedback I received from Nat and Tanida. My content was too broad and unfocussed which resulted in it being confusing and disconnected. And each product looks okay on its own but not as a set or series (which is due to the content being too broad and trying to communicate lots of things quickly rather than one or two things slowly and clearly). I think, for future briefs, I need to concentrate on keeping it simple and executing it well, rather than trying to do lots that looks shoddy and unclear.
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